tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post1900063046494816321..comments2017-03-02T14:17:56.986-07:00Comments on Magik Beans: Book 2, "Spring": Episode 01: How it all startedMike Perschonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09335943113292616702noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-80334956051984306882017-03-02T14:17:56.986-07:002017-03-02T14:17:56.986-07:00-30 Celsius.-30 Celsius.Mike Perschonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09335943113292616702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-3090099395704859392008-04-27T00:43:00.000-06:002008-04-27T00:43:00.000-06:00this is only a minor thing, but it confused me for...this is only a minor thing, but it confused me for a moment: <BR/><BR/>"The day had been a long one; the temperature had dropped beneath 30 degrees Celsius once you factored in the wind chill, which bit all the way through Andrew's heavy wool jacket."<BR/><BR/>should it be -30 degrees, or beneath 30 degrees fairenheit? right now it doesn't make sense.alannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00975872089883045573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-85198174755821192062007-06-11T20:43:00.000-06:002007-06-11T20:43:00.000-06:00Hey Mike! It's Buzz from that crazy place called C...Hey Mike! It's Buzz from that crazy place called Camp Chestermere. Loving the story so far, just wanted to let you know that and to say that I saw something funny with your first post and the first part of each post after that. In the first post your characters name is Andrew WeEzle and in the other posts it becomes Andrew WeAzle. Just a small thing, hope to hear from you sometime.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-80078181322068191472007-01-27T16:53:00.000-07:002007-01-27T16:53:00.000-07:00That's the challenge of writing without editing. 3...That's the challenge of writing without editing. 30 minutes a day doesn't allow for that as much as I like, which is one of the benefits to posting it - I have an army of editors at my disposal!Mike Perschonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09335943113292616702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-37689616823919877572007-01-27T16:40:00.000-07:002007-01-27T16:40:00.000-07:00I like it! I like it a lot!
Except for this sente...I like it! I like it a lot!<br /><br />Except for this sentence:<br /><i>What the lump saw was a rangy, blonde haired male in his mid-twenties with the drawn, haunted look that only years of a sporadic dating life resulting in late nights on multiple chat rooms followed by Protestant guilt and the realization that you still have a final essay due by noon repeated over several years will fashion upon the human face.</i><br /><br />Try reading it out loud and getting the pasues in the right place. I challenge you, you literature major!!!Tim Chestertonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13676859074652475474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-78197379559256917482007-01-27T12:40:00.000-07:002007-01-27T12:40:00.000-07:00Yup. Write what you know. Especially when you don'...Yup. Write what you know. Especially when you don't have the time to research the things you don't. If Andrew was JUST the manager of a coffee shop, I really wouldn't know how to 'write him'. I'd have to spend a ridiculous amount of time with blarg. And besides, this is mainly for fun...so a little pseudo-autobiography never hurts the soul.Mike Perschonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09335943113292616702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-23631958962217836252007-01-26T14:08:00.000-07:002007-01-26T14:08:00.000-07:00Fabulous. Just vintage Mike.Fabulous. Just vintage Mike.Keltiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09906394193821797737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-84380210179496687352007-01-26T14:05:00.000-07:002007-01-26T14:05:00.000-07:00Pretty good. I did notice that this Andrew fellow ...Pretty good. I did notice that this Andrew fellow seemed a bit like you in regards to what he had been studying in University. But then, I guess like they say, write what you know.Calvinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10971628936623296943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-53929726217144671092007-01-23T22:25:00.000-07:002007-01-23T22:25:00.000-07:00Updates on Thursdays!Updates on Thursdays!Mike Perschonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09335943113292616702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-2376320082023168292007-01-23T19:29:00.000-07:002007-01-23T19:29:00.000-07:00Let's have the second offering soon. I hate waiti...Let's have the second offering soon. I hate waiting. We eat up whole seasons of the Gilmore girls in a few days.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-27480051282017680892007-01-18T16:48:00.000-07:002007-01-18T16:48:00.000-07:00You must have! You scrolled through all that text ...You must have! You scrolled through all that text to add a comment!Mike Perschonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09335943113292616702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2331660459075373635.post-24823244112831446872007-01-18T10:09:00.000-07:002007-01-18T10:09:00.000-07:00I like it so far!I like it so far!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com